Week five (Term2)
- Jasmin Mohamed
- May 22
- 1 min read
On this week we had the mid term Crits for term 2

On this crit i got feedback from Roo, Mohamed, and Duncan
The feedback i got this week was helpful with further developing my masterplan and helped me further inspirations as well suggesting my project does target flooding on my site.
Make the design look dramatic
further vegetate the marshland
The new elevated path design was starting to work well with the design
understand more about the thames barrier
Try make the elevated walk more adventurous/ mysterious
design more use of the land on the site rather than just vegetation
The list possible activities i can have on the site
Kayaking Centre
Kids play area
Bird watching
Fishing
Swimming
Landscape panting
Meditating/ yoga
Gym
Teenager play area
fishing
sand pits
picnic
reading area
Adult swings, slides
Building Use
Kayaking service
Painting creative studio
yoga
restaurant
Cafe
Residents
Retail
Workshops
Learning Centre
Library
Habitats
Birds
Fish
Ants
Butterflies
Bees
Hedgehog
Foxes
Slugs
Insects
Reptiles
I worked on creating the storyboard




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